Creating Writing 8 (additional work)
No brand name products
Many people wants stand out from the crowd.
They always use brand name products.
They think use this can attractive people.
Also, many people believe that is beautiful.
But I think they always use brand name product can lose much money.
It is because their qualities are high.
People keep buy brand name products, your money must wasting.
I agree they can buy beautiful and cheap things.
Also, students always buy this things can affect their study.
I suggest they can buy cheap things.
I always buy brand name product.
So, I promise I do not buy this thing.
Want more freedom
Many students and people want more freedom.
For example, students want to meet friends shopping.
But parents are strict.
Also, students did not have any pocket money.
They think their pocket is little.
But I think parents love and care you.
They want you take a good mark and study hard.
They also want you can study in university in future.
Parents are selfish because they want you can hard working and do not always shopping with friends.
It is because always shopping can affect your marks.
I also suggest parents do not strict.
I think they can give more freedom to your son.
It can make your son happy.
