11th January, 2008 Friday Misty
Today, it was nice day.
It was because today is my school’s sport day.
In the morning, I was get up early.
It is because at seven thirty must go sport ground.
So, I wore Pathfinder A uniform.
I felt very happy.
After that, I wore school uniform.
After school, I went home playing piano.
I practised “Fur Elise”.
I felt it was easy.
After I practised piano, I was shopping.
I went Festival Walk shopping.
I like shopping very much.
I went there, there were many people.
I went there buy many things.
At night, I was doing homework.
When I was doing homework, I was sleeping on the desk.
It was because yesterday I was go bed late.
I wash my body about eleven o’clock.
My hair is wet.
So, I was go bed late.
I was tired.
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Today, it was a nice day, because today was my school’s sports day.
In the morning, I got up early, because at seven thirty I had to go to the sports ground.
So, I wore Pathfinder A uniform.
I felt very happy.
After that, I wore my school uniform.
After school, I went home to play the piano.
I practised “Fur Elise”. I felt it was easy.
After I practised the piano, I went shopping.
I went to Festival Walk to shop.
I like shopping very much.
I went there, there were many people.
I went there to buy many things.
At night, I was doing homework.
While I was doing homework, I went to sleep on the desk.
It was because yesterday I went to bed late.
I washed my body at about eleven o’clock. (showered? bathed?)
My hair is wet.
So, I went to bed late.
I was tired.
Dear Betty, your English is already very good. I hope you will see where I have changed your message to make it correct. If you do not want me to do this, just tell me. Best wishes, Walrus