Kai Fai writes article is good.
He has great progress.
Although he writes article about grammar has some mistake, but most is correct.
I feel he was very hard-working to write diary.
He also punctually submits his homework.
He did not resist.
I very like him study manner is very earnest.

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28th October, 2007 Sunday Sunny
Today, it was a wonderful day.
At the morning, I was doing my homework.
There was much homework to do.
After me doing homework, I was shopping with my primary school friends.
We went shopping in Harbor City.
There were many people to go there.
Also, there were many expensive things.
We didn’t have much money to buy it.
First, we went cosmetic company to buy cosmetic.
For example, eye shadow, nail polish.
Then, we went to Toys shop to buy hula hoop.
There were many different things.
After that, we went to City super to buy chocolate and articles for daily use.
Finally, we went cloths shop to buy cloths.
At the evening, I went home to practice pipa.
There were many songs to pluck.
At night, I was dancing and listening to music with my friends.
I was danced Latin.
I felt very happy.

27th October, 2007 Saturday Sunny
Today, it was a nice day.
Today, I woke up early.
It was because today was hiking with Mr. Fan and Mr. Bimand.
At the morning, I went Sai Kung hiking.
There were many slopes to walk.
The sun was shining everywhere and it was very hot.
I felt very tired.
Also, there were many dogs and bees.
So, I was very afraid.
At the afternoon, we were going to the beach.
The view was very beautiful
We walked many road but we didn’t go to destination.
At the evening, I was taking a bus with students.
I felt very dizzy.
I afraid next week I will fever.
After I went home, I was washing my body.
Then, I was practice piano until eight o’clock.
Finally, I went to bed sleeping until seven o’clock in Sunday morning.